Sunrise 日出

I once saw sunrise. It was very amazing and beautiful. The night before, we lived in the top of mountain. About 4 p.m., we went out of the tent. It was so dark outside that we could not see anything. It was very quiet and seemed that everything was sleeping.About twenty minutes later, the sky turned to white slowly. And we can see the outline of mountains. Suddenly, the clouds turned to brighten and slowly, the sun rised slowly. It was red, but after it appeared totally, it became golden. Its light irradiated to everywhere. The sky was totally golden and it was really beautiful.

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我曾经看过日出，景色很惊奇很美。前天晚上，我们到山顶过夜。大约四点的时候，我们走出帐篷，外面一片漆黑，什么也看不到。周围很安静，好像万物都在沉睡。大约过了20分钟，天空开始慢慢变白。我们可以看到山的轮廓。突然，云朵渐渐地变得明亮起来，太阳缓缓升起。开始它是红色的，但是它完全升起后就变成金色的了。它的光芒照射到每一个角落。天空完全变成了金色的，甚是好看。